PoliceWiki talk:Invitation email

(Look at me figuring out what all the pages do.) I haven't combed through this in detail yet, sock (and of course, Schmaff may if she likes), but my impressions on the initial read are good. I like your tone, and I very much like that you talk about the fandom section and the desire to give credit and acknowledgment to fan efforts.--DM-Kellie 06:13, 7 February 2008 (PST)

Yay on figuring out stuff :). One thing I'm thinking of adding is maybe a brief intro to the administrators, since some folks we'd be contacting might not know us and be wondering who the heck these folks are.--Sockii 06:38, 7 February 2008 (PST)

Honestly, I think that might be a bit much considering all the information you've already got going on. If anything, I would say to just include a sentence about yourself, since a small bit of info on you might be helpful, both for politeness and for cred -- but including all of us might be rather gang-y looking. --Actually, IMHO, it might also make more sense to have just you sign the email since you're the site owner, CEO, and Big Cheese. You're the Gladys Knight. We're The Pips. --DM-Kellie 07:30, 7 February 2008 (PST)

Well, I think it's absolutely perfect!! - Schmaff